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Sometimes it gets me depressed right before I go to rest
When society ain't ready to fight for what's right
My brain drifts into the cosmic rain
When I contemplate all the reckless hate
It leaves me in a state I just can't relate
So I just try to escape
Into my past, it won't last
All you needed then was a nickel and dime
To have a good time.

But I know I'm stronger than those yesterdays
Because of those "I control my own destiny days"
I have my own beliefs at least I'm open...sometimes I'm amazed.

Of how society's piety can lead to such... animosity.
And how such strong devotion creates much commotion
It explodes with emotion and drives the propulsion of extortion
Unbalances the world's proportion and leads to... war
Don't you feel torn?

The human race is greedy, needy and shifty.
Many tricks are up sleeves which wind up putting many people on their knees.

I'd like you to have a heart even though its hard to start walking down that path
If you don't... I feel you'll end up in someone else's wrath.
It takes tolerance, kindness, good will, and no blindness.

That's what matters.

If in your head you have negative views they'll be of no use.
It just makes it worse when you curse and blame
You should just feel ashamed.

Thinking more proactive will become more attractive.

Only if you knew...

...Maybe you'd want everyone to be in your crew.
©2008-2009 ~07659800
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Author's Comments

I wrote this for my night school English.
I kept re-editing it and this is the "current" version.

Hope you like it.

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